24 March 2010

Excuse Me Dear

in response to This Is Just To Say by William Carlos Williams:

Excuse me dear
Im sorry
Please forgive me for what I've done.

It was so great
So tasty
I felt alive

I drank all your coffee
I've got none left
You've got to get more
Im sorry I forgot
But I could'nt go to the store.








One of our class assignments was reading a poem and that writing a poem inspired from it. This was the first inspired poem. I did two.
I also revised this one for my midterm. I added more and hopefully made it somewhat more interesting and better.

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